The Secret Ghost City




I have 2 friends named Manny and Aanny. My friends called me for lunch to their home for a small party, as I was turning 18. I quickly dressed in an orange frilly frock and got into their car. It was raining and the clouds covered the sun. It was a cold, windy and dark day. It was a short distance, I got the umbrella, still I got drenched badly, but I did not care, as I was excited to meet my friends.

Aanny asked me “Hey, Sammy are you excited for lunch together?.
I said “Yes, of course!” We passed by an open plot of land with only a little grass. Suddenly the car made some noise and stopped. I quickly reached out to the door and tried to open it, but it did not happen. So Aanny and Manny started to kick the front glass. After a long time the glass finally broke and all of us got out. When we looked around we saw the open plot of grass, in the middle of it stood a villa. “Ssooooooooooooooo  bbiiiiiggggg” said Aanny. Manny asked “Do you think it is a good idea to go inside the villa and ask whether we could stay there for the night?” to Aanny and Sammy. Suddenly someone said “I do not think you should be going there.” As we turned we noticed a scary looking man in tattered clothes passing by.

We had no option because it was raining heavily. So we went to the villa and the door creaked open on its own. When we entered we heard a soft whispering voice “You will be sorry for entering.” That made me shiver. Suddenly the floor below vanished and we all fell!  
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
When we realized this fall was never ending. It felt like we were falling forever. After some time I started getting thoughts like “Am I going to fall and break into pieces or am I going to fall and get paralyzed?” Suddenly another scream broke my chain of thoughts. Then I realized that it was Aanny who was screaming. I shouted back “Are you OK? But there was no response.
 Suddenly, I noticed that Manny and Aanny were not around me. To my horror I could not even see my own body. “Oh, No! I was totally invisible!”
Then I heard a shrill noise that said “You would not live till tomorrow!!!” I could see ghost flying around me, and skeletons shining and hanging on the walls. It was pitch dark everywhere.

I also heard some scary laughing sounds which for sure was coming from the skeletons. There were bones on the walls. The skeletons seemed to be moving. I felt something started to strangle me. I did not know how anybody could strangle me even though I was on my doom fall. I was totally suffocated.
 Then, to my surprise, I realized that Aanny was strangling me and it looked like she was hypnotized. I was totally out of breath, I was fainting. In that state of mind I also realized that Manny looked hypnotized too. She was on the wall taking a pose like the skeletons.
 I shouted “Manny ,are you OK?” She just growled back at me.
But I didn’t have a lot of time and I started thrashing around and hit a lantern. Lantern crashed and broke. Its oil caught fire and it brought Aanny and Manny to their senses. Fire spread and soon entire villa was on fire. I caught their hands and we dashed out of the villa. We sat in our car and it started this time. We went back home and were glad that we came out safe from this adventure.

Next evening when we met, Manny said, "i am so glad that we ended this evil by burning the entire villa. No one will have to suffer it again."

But that very evening another car passes that open plot of land and stopped..

The end??

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  2. Hi Nabhanya, your writings are very engaging! I love them. Keep weaving these stories my love!

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  3. Puneet Krishna5 June 2018 at 03:43

    Hey Nabhanya, it was a wonderful read. Thanks for writing this story. Looking forward to reading many more stories from you.

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  4. Kid! I'm a fan of thriller and ghost stories. This is by far one of the best ones. You succeeded to take me that world Manny and Aanny were.
    The part that said "I was wondering if I would break to pieces or fall paralysed" beautiful way to represent the actual fearful thoughts one would have.
    Bellissimo kiddo.
    From you fan.
    Divya raghuvamsini.

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  5. Very good ! Keep playing with the words, Little Wordsmith!

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  6. That's really good work. Never stop writing!

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  7. Great stuff! Keep it up!!😃

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  8. Hey Rowling! Watch out!!!
    This little wordsmith is on her way to give you run for your money!!!!

    All the best kid! The world is waiting for you!!!

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  9. Loved reading it Nabhanya:) The part where they all fall down did remind me of Harry Potter! Waiting for the next one...All the best:)

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  10. No comment, just that that you should have improved on the ending

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